Fantastick 2015-05-02 00:01:16

FUN FACT: PEOPLE ACTUALLY DRINK SHIT COFFEE.

Fantastick 2015-05-02 01:04:32

BELIEVE IT, NONBELIEVER.

I'VE ONLY 5 YEARS LEFT TO LIVE.

Flikkernicht 2015-05-02 14:36:50

Pretty interesting read, I remember I was gonna tell you that I really like the way the backgrounds came out, specifically. Not that my opinion really matters about the comedy stuff either but I think you've been getting a lot better on that plane as well.
I also agree 100% about how it's weird talking to people in person that you've only seen/spoken to online at first-- This was like my sixth time doing it though so for the most part that's really died down. First few times I did it I remember it felt really surreal.
Anyways though your cartoon was really good, I dig how you're able to work with a lot of different styles. Nice talking with you at Pico Day too!!!!!!

Mosspop 2015-05-02 19:42:02

It's already been brought up that your backgrounds are really neat - definitely fits in with any professional-grade cartoon one might see on TV. It's an approach that I recognized but never really thought about til now, thanks for sharing!

Also, I wouldn't get too bummed if you feel your stuff is getting formulaic. At the moment you're playing to your strengths - this toon had a great flow of dialogue and the character/background styles didn't conflict at all (in fact they complimented each other). If you feel like you want to experiment with other means of storytelling, then by all means go way out of your comfort zone and try something new. You'll only emerge better of because of it. As of right now, though, I'd say you've been playing to your strengths, which isn't at all a bad thing. I've watched all of your animations and every one has a tale worth investing time in - don't knock yourself because you've grown and learned some stuff since then. I'm actually surprised to learn there's such a thing as 4-point perspective and I've been studying art/animation for near a year now! I'd love to know how you got the moving lines in your characters, too - gives your characters a nice vibe and energy I can't quite explain. Their poses were also really swell - they impacted the characters' lines and conveyed attitude in the zany way only animation can achieve. Glad to see someone still cares about that, since I doubt it happened by accident!

That spiel's a little larger than it probably should be but I'd boil it down to: good job. I'm looking forward to the stuff you make in the future, and you make your own limits (or something to that effect... euh.) Good stuff, I really enjoy your content and thanks for making and sharing it.

Pjorg 2015-05-02 21:30:50

Bob you and me lets make a webseries no bit